OET interlinear JDG 2:18

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

וְ⁠כִֽי־הֵקִ֨ים יְהוָ֥ה ׀ לָ⁠הֶם֮ שֹֽׁפְטִים֒ & כִּֽי־יִנָּחֵ֤ם יְהוָה֙ מִ⁠נַּֽאֲקָתָ֔⁠ם מִ⁠פְּנֵ֥י לֹחֲצֵי⁠הֶ֖ם וְ⁠דֹחֲקֵי⁠הֶֽם

and=because/when raised_up YHWH to/for=them judges & that/for/because/then/when moved_to_pity YHWH from,their_of,groaning from=face/in_front_of [those_of,who]_oppressed_them and,[those_of,who]_oppressed_them

If it would be more natural in your language, you could put the second sentence of this verse at the beginning of the verse, since it gives the reason for what the rest of the verse describes. Within that sentence, you could also put the reason before the result. Alternate translation: [For the people of Israel were groaning because of their afflicters and oppressors. Yahweh had compassion on them, so he raised up judges for them]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

הֵקִ֨ים יְהוָ֥ה ׀ לָ⁠הֶם֮ שֹֽׁפְטִים֒

raised_up YHWH to/for=them judges

See how you translated the expression raised up in [2:16](../02/16.md). Alternate translation: [Yahweh provided judges for them]

Note 3 topic: writing-pronouns

וְ⁠הֽוֹשִׁיעָ⁠ם֙

and,he,delivered_them

The pronoun them refers to the Israelites. The pronoun he could refer either to Yahweh or to the judge, although there is not a significant difference in meaning. Alternate translation: [and Yahweh saved the Israelites] or [and that enabled the judge to save the Israelites]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

כֹּ֖ל יְמֵ֣י הַ⁠שּׁוֹפֵ֑ט

all days_of of,the_judge

See how you translated the word days in [2:7](../02/07.md). Alternate translation: [throughout the lifetime of that judge]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / synecdoche

מִ⁠פְּנֵ֥י לֹחֲצֵי⁠הֶ֖ם וְ⁠דֹחֲקֵי⁠הֶֽם

from=face/in_front_of [those_of,who]_oppressed_them and,[those_of,who]_oppressed_them

The author is using one part of these enemies, their faces, to represent the enemies themselves in the act of afflicting and oppressing the Israelites. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [caused by their afflicters and their oppressors]