OET interlinear DEU 30:3

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וְ⁠שָׁ֨ב יְהוָ֧ה אֱלֹהֶ֛י⁠ךָ אֶת־שְׁבוּתְ⁠ךָ֖

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_will_turn_back YHWH God_of,your DOM captivity_of,your and,he,will_have_compassion_on_you and,he_will_return and,he,will_gather_you from=all the,peoples which/who he,has_scattered_you YHWH God_of,your to,(to) )

Here Moses is speaking as if captivity were a physical object that God could turn back. Moses means that God will end their captivity and restore them to their land. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [then Yahweh your God will end your captivity] or [then Yahweh your God will restore you from captivity]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

וְ⁠רִחֲמֶ֑⁠ךָ

and,he,will_have_compassion_on_you

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of compassion, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [and be merciful to you]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / doublet

וְ⁠שָׁ֗ב וְ⁠קִבֶּצְ⁠ךָ֙

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_will_turn_back YHWH God_of,your DOM captivity_of,your and,he,will_have_compassion_on_you and,he_will_return and,he,will_gather_you from=all the,peoples which/who he,has_scattered_you YHWH God_of,your to,(to) )

The terms return and gather mean similar things. The author is using the two terms together for emphasis. If it would be clearer for your readers, you could express the emphasis with a single phrase. Alternate translation: [and he will allow you to return]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicitinfo

אֲשֶׁ֧ר הֱפִֽיצְ⁠ךָ֛ יְהוָ֥ה אֱלֹהֶ֖י⁠ךָ שָֽׁמָּ⁠ה

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_will_turn_back YHWH God_of,your DOM captivity_of,your and,he,will_have_compassion_on_you and,he_will_return and,he,will_gather_you from=all the,peoples which/who he,has_scattered_you YHWH God_of,your to,(to) )

It might seem that the expression where Yahweh your God has scattered you there contains extra information that would not be natural to express in your language. If so, you could shorten it. Alternate translation: [where Yahweh your God has scattered you]