OET interlinear 2 SAM 23:17

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

חָלִילָ⁠ה֩ לִּ֨⁠י

far,be_it (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said far,be_it to/for=me YHWH from,doing,my this(f) the,blood?_of of,the_men [who],went with,lives_of,their and=not would to,drink,them these they_had_acquired three_of the=powerful/mighty(pl) )

See how you translated the similar expression in [20:20](../20/20.md). Alternate translation: [Far be it from me]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / ellipsis

הֲ⁠דַ֤ם הָֽ⁠אֲנָשִׁים֙ הַ⁠הֹלְכִ֣ים בְּ⁠נַפְשׁוֹתָ֔⁠ם

the,blood?_of (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said far,be_it to/for=me YHWH from,doing,my this(f) the,blood?_of of,the_men [who],went with,lives_of,their and=not would to,drink,them these they_had_acquired three_of the=powerful/mighty(pl) )

David is leaving out some of the words that in many languages a sentence would need in order to be complete. You can supply these words from the context if that would be clearer in your language. Alternate translation: [from drinking the blood of the men having gone with their lives]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

הֲ⁠דַ֤ם הָֽ⁠אֲנָשִׁים֙ הַ⁠הֹלְכִ֣ים בְּ⁠נַפְשׁוֹתָ֔⁠ם

the,blood?_of (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said far,be_it to/for=me YHWH from,doing,my this(f) the,blood?_of of,the_men [who],went with,lives_of,their and=not would to,drink,them these they_had_acquired three_of the=powerful/mighty(pl) )

David is using having gone with their lives as a common expression of his culture to mean “who risked their lives.” If this phrase does not have that meaning in your language, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [the blood of the men who risked their lives to get it]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

הֲ⁠דַ֤ם הָֽ⁠אֲנָשִׁים֙ הַ⁠הֹלְכִ֣ים בְּ⁠נַפְשׁוֹתָ֔⁠ם

the,blood?_of (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said far,be_it to/for=me YHWH from,doing,my this(f) the,blood?_of of,the_men [who],went with,lives_of,their and=not would to,drink,them these they_had_acquired three_of the=powerful/mighty(pl) )

David is speaking as if the water that the men brought were actually their blood. He means that the water represents the danger into which these men put their lives to get it for him. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [this water that I am pouring out, since the blood of these men could just as easily have been poured out when they risked their lives to get it]

Note 5 topic: writing-endofstory

אֵ֣לֶּה עָשׂ֔וּ שְׁלֹ֖שֶׁת הַ⁠גִּבֹּרִֽים

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said far,be_it to/for=me YHWH from,doing,my this(f) the,blood?_of of,the_men [who],went with,lives_of,their and=not would to,drink,them these they_had_acquired three_of the=powerful/mighty(pl) )

The author is offering a summary of the stories he has just related. This signals the end of this section about these three warriors. Use a natural way in your language to offer a summary that concludes a section. Alternate translation: [Those are some of the things that David’s three mighty warriors did for him] or [So ends the account of what these three warriors did]