OET interlinear NUM 18:22

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

וְ⁠לֹא יִקְרְב֥וּ ע֛וֹד בְּנֵ֥י יִשְׂרָאֵ֖ל אֶל אֹ֣הֶל מוֹעֵ֑ד לָ⁠שֵׂ֥את חֵ֖טְא לָ⁠מֽוּת

and=not come_near again/more sons_of Yisrael to/towards tent/house meeting to,bear sin to,die

Here, to die indicates the result of the Israelites coming near to the tent of meeting and incurring guilt. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a result of what came before. Alternate translation: [And the sons of Israel shall not again come near to the tent of meeting to lift up sin, or they will die]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / gendernotations

בְּנֵ֥י יִשְׂרָאֵ֖ל

sons_of Yisrael

See how you translated the similar expression in 18:5.

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

לָ⁠שֵׂ֥את חֵ֖טְא לָ⁠מֽוּת

to,bear sin to,die

Yahweh is using to lift up sin as a common expression of the culture to mean “to incur guilt.” If this phrase does not have that meaning for your readers, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [to incur guilt and die]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

חֵ֖טְא

sin

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of sin, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [what they have done wrong]