OET interlinear JOB 13:10

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

הוֹכֵ֣חַ יוֹכִ֣יחַ אֶתְ⁠כֶ֑ם אִם־בַּ֝⁠סֵּ֗תֶר פָּנִ֥ים תִּשָּׂאֽוּ⁠ן

to_rebuke he_would_rebuke DOM,you_all if in/on/at/with,secret faces you_all_showed_paritality,

If it would be more natural in your language, you could reverse the order of these phrases, since the second phrase gives the reason for the result that the first phrase describes. Alternate translation: “If in secret you were lifting faces, reproving, he would reprove you”

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / reduplication

הוֹכֵ֣חַ יוֹכִ֣יחַ

to_rebuke he_would_rebuke

Job is repeating the verb reprove in order to intensify the idea that it expresses. If your language can repeat words for intensification, it would be appropriate to do that here in your translation. If not, your language may have another way of expressing the emphasis. Alternate translation: “He would certainly reprove”

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

פָּנִ֥ים תִּשָּׂאֽוּ⁠ן

faces you_all_showed_paritality,

See how you translated the similar expression in 13:8. Alternate translation: “you were showing favoritism”