OET interlinear 1 KI 16:24

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: translate-bweight

בְּ⁠כִכְּרַ֣יִם כָּ֑סֶף

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_bought DOM the,hill Shomrōn from,with Shemer for,two_talents silver and=he/it_built DOM the,hill and=he/it_called DOM name_of the=city which/who built on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in name_of Shemer owner_of of,the_hill Shomrōn )

See how you decided in 9:14 to describe weights that the biblical author expresses in terms of kikkars.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / synecdoche

וַ⁠יִּ֨בֶן֙

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_bought DOM the,hill Shomrōn from,with Shemer for,two_talents silver and=he/it_built DOM the,hill and=he/it_called DOM name_of the=city which/who built on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in name_of Shemer owner_of of,the_hill Shomrōn )

The author is using one person who was involved in this action, Omri, to mean everyone who was involved, including his workers. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [And he had his workers build]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicitinfo

וַ⁠יִּקְרָ֗א אֶת־שֵׁ֤ם הָ⁠עִיר֙

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_bought DOM the,hill Shomrōn from,with Shemer for,two_talents silver and=he/it_built DOM the,hill and=he/it_called DOM name_of the=city which/who built on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in name_of Shemer owner_of of,the_hill Shomrōn )

It might seem that this expression contains extra information that would not be natural to express in your language. If so, you could shorten it. Alternate translation: [and he named the city]