OET interlinear PSA 38:1

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

יְֽהוָ֗ה אַל־בְּ⁠קֶצְפְּ⁠ךָ֥ תוֹכִיחֵ֑⁠נִי וּֽ⁠בַ⁠חֲמָתְ⁠ךָ֥ תְיַסְּרֵֽ⁠נִי

(Some words not found in UHB: song of,David to,make_remembrance )

These two phrases mean basically the same thing. The second emphasizes the meaning of the first by repeating the same idea with different words. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could combine them and express the emphasis in another way. Another approach would be to connect the phrases with a word that shows that the second phrase is repeating the first one, not saying something additional as in the UST. See how you as a team have decided to translate the parallel phrases in the Psalms, and follow that approach here and throughout this psalm. Alternate translation: [Yahweh, please do not continue to discipline me in your anger]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

בְּ⁠קֶצְפְּ⁠ךָ֥

(Some words not found in UHB: song of,David to,make_remembrance )

If your language does not use abstract noun for the idea of anger you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [when you are angry]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

וּֽ⁠בַ⁠חֲמָתְ⁠ךָ֥ תְיַסְּרֵֽ⁠נִי

(Some words not found in UHB: song of,David to,make_remembrance )

If your language does not use abstract noun for the idea of wrath, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [nor discipline me when you are furious]