OET interlinear 1 SAM 24:5

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: writing-newevent

וַֽ⁠יְהִי֙ אַֽחֲרֵי־כֵ֔ן

and=he/it_was after so

The author is introducing a new development in the story. Use a word, phrase, or other method here that is natural in your language for introducing a new development.

Note 2 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

וַ⁠יַּ֥ךְ לֵב־דָּוִ֖ד אֹת֑⁠וֹ עַ֚ל אֲשֶׁ֣ר כָּרַ֔ת אֶת־כָּנָ֖ף אֲשֶׁ֥ר לְ⁠שָׁאֽוּל

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_was after so and,it_struck conscience_of Dāvid DOM=him/it on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in which/who cut_off DOM wing/corner/skirt which/who [belonged]_to,Saul )

If it would be more natural in your language, you could reverse the order of these phrases, since the second phrase gives the reason for the result that the first phrase describes. Alternate translation: [that because he had cut off the edge that was to Saul, the heart of David struck him]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וַ⁠יַּ֥ךְ לֵב־דָּוִ֖ד אֹת֑⁠וֹ

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_was after so and,it_struck conscience_of Dāvid DOM=him/it on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in which/who cut_off DOM wing/corner/skirt which/who [belonged]_to,Saul )

The author is speaking as if David’s heart had physically struck him. If it would be clearer in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [that David felt very guilty]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / ellipsis

אֶת־כָּנָ֖ף אֲשֶׁ֥ר לְ⁠שָׁאֽוּל

DOM (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_was after so and,it_struck conscience_of Dāvid DOM=him/it on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in which/who cut_off DOM wing/corner/skirt which/who [belonged]_to,Saul )

The author is leaving out some words that in many languages would be needed to complete the meaning. You can supply these words from the context. Alternate translation: [the edge of the robe that belonged to Saul]