OET interlinear 1 SAM 24:20

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / reduplication

מָלֹ֖ךְ תִּמְל֑וֹךְ

to_be_king (Some words not found in UHB: and=now see/lo/see! I_know that/for/because/then/when to_be_king you_will_be_king and,it_will_be_established in,hand_of,your kingdom_of Yisrael )

Saul is repeating forms of the verb “reign” in order to intensify his expression of the idea that it conveys. If your language can repeat words for intensification, it would be appropriate to do that here in your translation. If not, your language may have another way of expressing the intensification. Alternate translation: [you will certainly reign]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

וְ⁠קָ֨מָה֙ בְּ⁠יָ֣דְ⁠ךָ֔ מַמְלֶ֖כֶת יִשְׂרָאֵֽל

and,it_will_be_established (Some words not found in UHB: and=now see/lo/see! I_know that/for/because/then/when to_be_king you_will_be_king and,it_will_be_established in,hand_of,your kingdom_of Yisrael )

See how you translated the similar expression “your kingdom will not stand” in 13:24. Alternate translation: [and the kingdom of Israel will endure under your rule]