OET interlinear PRO 5:11

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / euphemism

בְ⁠אַחֲרִיתֶ֑⁠ךָ בִּ⁠כְל֥וֹת בְּ֝שָׂרְ⁠ךָ֗ וּ⁠שְׁאֵרֶֽ⁠ךָ

in/on/at/with,end_of,your in/on/at/with,consumed flesh_of,your and,body_of,your

Here Solomon is referring to dying in a polite way by using the word end and the phrase your body and your flesh are finished. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use a polite way of referring to death in your language, or you could express the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “at the time of your death, when your flesh and your body die”

Note 2 topic: grammar-connect-words-phrases

וְ⁠נָהַמְתָּ֥

and,groan

This verse continues the meaning of the word lest in [5:10](../05/10.md). What follows in this verse are more things that will happen to young men if they do not obey the commands in [5:8](../05/08.md). Use a natural form in your language to connect this statement to the previous one. Alternate translation: “and furthermore, if you fail to obey my teaching, you will groan”

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / doublet

בְּ֝שָׂרְ⁠ךָ֗ וּ⁠שְׁאֵרֶֽ⁠ךָ

flesh_of,your and,body_of,your

The words flesh and body mean basically the same thing and represent the whole person. Solomon is using the two terms together for emphasis. If it would be clearer for your readers, you could express the emphasis with a single phrase. Alternate translation: “you yourself”