InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Deu C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C16 C17 C18 C19 C20 C22 C23 C24 C25 C26 C27 C28 C29 C30 C31 C32 C33 C34
Deu 21 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19 V20 V22 V23
OET-LV And_they_will_stone_him all_of the_men_of his_city_of_his with_stones and_he_will_die and_you_will_remove the_evil from_midst_of_your and_all Yisrāʼēl/(Israel) they_will_hear and_they_will_fear.
OET (OET-RV) Then all the men from that place must execute him by throwing rocks at him, thus removing that evil from among you. Then everyone in Yisrael (Israel) will hear about it and be afraid to imitate him.
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / nominaladj
וּבִֽעַרְתָּ֥ הָרָ֖ע מִקִּרְבֶּ֑ךָ
(Some words not found in UHB: and,they,will_stone_him all/each/any/every men_of his_city_of,his with,stones and,he_will_die and,you_will_remove the,evil from,midst_of,your and=all Yisrael they_will_understand and,they_will_fear )
See how you translated this same phrase in 13:5.
Note 2 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result
וְכָל־יִשְׂרָאֵ֖ל יִשְׁמְע֥וּ וְיִרָֽאוּ
and=all (Some words not found in UHB: and,they,will_stone_him all/each/any/every men_of his_city_of,his with,stones and,he_will_die and,you_will_remove the,evil from,midst_of,your and=all Yisrael they_will_understand and,they_will_fear )
The words And all Israel will hear and fear indicate the result of executing the rebellious son. If it would be clearer in your language, you could make this logical relationship explicit. Alternate translation: [As a result, all Israel will hear about this punishment and be afraid to behave in the same way]
OET-LV And_they_will_stone_him all_of the_men_of his_city_of_his with_stones and_he_will_die and_you_will_remove the_evil from_midst_of_your and_all Yisrāʼēl/(Israel) they_will_hear and_they_will_fear.
OET (OET-RV) Then all the men from that place must execute him by throwing rocks at him, thus removing that evil from among you. Then everyone in Yisrael (Israel) will hear about it and be afraid to imitate him.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.