OET interlinear DEU 28:58

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-condition-hypothetical

אִם־לֹ֨א תִשְׁמֹ֜ר לַ⁠עֲשׂ֗וֹת אֶת־כָּל־דִּבְרֵי֙ הַ⁠תּוֹרָ֣ה הַ⁠זֹּ֔את

if not (Some words not found in UHB: if not careful for=doing DOM all/each/any/every words_of of,the_law (the),this [which,are]_written in,book the=this to,fear DOM the=name (the),glorious and,(the),awesome the=this DOM YHWH God_of,your )

Here, If you do not keep doing all the words of this law introduces the first part of a possible condition. Yahweh will only do the things in verse 59 if this condition happens. Use a natural form in your language for introducing a condition that could happen. Alternate translation: [Suppose you do not keep doing all the words of this law]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

הַ⁠כְּתוּבִ֖ים

(Some words not found in UHB: if not careful for=doing DOM all/each/any/every words_of of,the_law (the),this [which,are]_written in,book the=this to,fear DOM the=name (the),glorious and,(the),awesome the=this DOM YHWH God_of,your )

The expression are written is a passive verbal form. If your language would not use that form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. If you need to say who does the action, the context indicates that it is Yahweh. Alternate translation: [that Yahweh has given me to write]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

אֶת־הַ⁠שֵּׁ֞ם הַ⁠נִּכְבָּ֤ד וְ⁠הַ⁠נּוֹרָא֙ הַ⁠זֶּ֔ה אֵ֖ת יְהוָ֥ה אֱלֹהֶֽי⁠ךָ

DOM DOM (Some words not found in UHB: if not careful for=doing DOM all/each/any/every words_of of,the_law (the),this [which,are]_written in,book the=this to,fear DOM the=name (the),glorious and,(the),awesome the=this DOM YHWH God_of,your )

Here, name represents Yahweh himself, including his character, power, and reputation. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [Yahweh your God himself, who is glorious and to be revered]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

אֶת־הַ⁠שֵּׁ֞ם הַ⁠נִּכְבָּ֤ד וְ⁠הַ⁠נּוֹרָא֙ הַ⁠זֶּ֔ה

DOM DOM (Some words not found in UHB: if not careful for=doing DOM all/each/any/every words_of of,the_law (the),this [which,are]_written in,book the=this to,fear DOM the=name (the),glorious and,(the),awesome the=this DOM YHWH God_of,your )

If your language does not use abstract nouns for the ideas of glorious and feared, you could express the same ideas in other ways. Alternate translation: [this name that brings glory and terror] or [this name that people glorify and revere]