OET interlinear NUM 11:34

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

וַ⁠יִּקְרָ֛א אֶת־שֵֽׁם־הַ⁠מָּק֥וֹם הַ⁠ה֖וּא קִבְר֣וֹת הַֽתַּאֲוָ֑ה כִּי־שָׁם֙ קָֽבְר֔וּ אֶת־הָ⁠עָ֖ם הַ⁠מִּתְאַוִּֽים

and=he/it_called DOM name_of of,the_place (the)=that Qiⱱrōt- -hattaʼₐvāh that/for/because/then/when there buried DOM the,people [who],craved

If it would be more natural in your language, you could reverse the order of these phrases, since the second phrase gives the reason for the result that the first phrase describes. Alternate translation: [and because there they buried the people who had desired, he called the name of that place Kibroth Hattaavah]

Note 2 topic: writing-pronouns

וַ⁠יִּקְרָ֛א

and=he/it_called

See how you translated the similar form in 11:3. Here, the pronoun he could refer: (1) generically to anyone who used this name. Alternate translation: [and people called] (2) to Moses. Alternate translation: [and Moses called]

Note 3 topic: translate-names

קִבְר֣וֹת הַֽתַּאֲוָ֑ה

Qiⱱrōt- -hattaʼₐvāh

This name Kibroth Hattaavah sounds like the Hebrew words for “graves of desire.” This place got this name because the Israelites buried there the people who had strongly desired meat. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could explain this in the text of your translation or in a footnote.