OET interlinear 2 SAM 24:16

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

וַ⁠יִּשְׁלַח֩ יָד֨⁠וֹ הַ⁠מַּלְאָ֥ךְ

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_stretched_out his/its=hand the,angel Yerushalayim to,destroy,it and=he/it_sighed/regretted YHWH to/towards ,harm and=he/it_said to,angel [who,was]_destroying among,people great//chief/captain now withdraw hand_of,your and,the_angel_of YHWH it_became with threshing_floor_of the, the,Jebusite )

The author could be using the same expression that occurs earlier in the book, in 1:14 and 18:12, to mean that the angel was preparing to use violence (in the form of this plague) against the people of the city of Jerusalem. When Yahweh tells him to lower his hand, that could mean that he is not to afflict the people with the plague. However, since David sees the angel, it seems more likely that the angel actually had reached out and upward with his hand and that Yahweh told him to put his hand back down and not use it to cause the plague. So you may choose to translate this literally.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / extrainfo

הַ⁠מַּלְאָ֥ךְ

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_stretched_out his/its=hand the,angel Yerushalayim to,destroy,it and=he/it_sighed/regretted YHWH to/towards ,harm and=he/it_said to,angel [who,was]_destroying among,people great//chief/captain now withdraw hand_of,your and,the_angel_of YHWH it_became with threshing_floor_of the, the,Jebusite )

The term the angel refers to the angel whom God sent to bring a plague on Israel. You could identify this angel more fully in that way here. However, this angel is identified in verse 17 as “the striker among the people.” Because this information appears in the following verse, you may not find a need to explain about the angel further here.