OET interlinear MARK 8:34

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-condition-hypothetical

εἴ τις θέλει

(Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί προσκαλεσάμενος τόν ὄχλον σύν τοῖς μαθηταῖς αὐτοῦ εἶπεν αὐτοῖς Εἰ τὶς θέλει ὀπίσω μού ἀκολουθεῖν ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτόν καί ἀράτω τόν σταυρόν αὐτοῦ καί ἀκολουθείτω μοί)

Here Jesus uses the conditional form to refer to anyone who wants to follow after him. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use whatever form naturally introduces anyone who wants to follow Jesus. Alternate translation: [Anyone who wants] or [When someone wants]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

ὀπίσω μου ἀκολουθεῖν & ἀκολουθείτω μοι

after (Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί προσκαλεσάμενος τόν ὄχλον σύν τοῖς μαθηταῖς αὐτοῦ εἶπεν αὐτοῖς Εἰ τὶς θέλει ὀπίσω μού ἀκολουθεῖν ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτόν καί ἀράτω τόν σταυρόν αὐτοῦ καί ἀκολουθείτω μοί)

Here, the phrases follow after me and follow me refer to traveling with Jesus and being his disciples. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use a comparable phrase or state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [to be my disciples … be my disciple] or [to travel with me as my students … travel with me as my student]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / imperative3p

ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτὸν, καὶ ἀράτω τὸν σταυρὸν αὐτοῦ, καὶ ἀκολουθείτω μοι

˱him˲_˓let˒_renounce (Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί προσκαλεσάμενος τόν ὄχλον σύν τοῖς μαθηταῖς αὐτοῦ εἶπεν αὐτοῖς Εἰ τὶς θέλει ὀπίσω μού ἀκολουθεῖν ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτόν καί ἀράτω τόν σταυρόν αὐτοῦ καί ἀκολουθείτω μοί)

If your language does not use third-person imperatives in this way, you could state these in another way that is natural in your language. Alternate translation: [he should deny himself and take up his cross and follow me]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / gendernotations

ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτὸν & αὐτοῦ

˱him˲_˓let˒_renounce (Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί προσκαλεσάμενος τόν ὄχλον σύν τοῖς μαθηταῖς αὐτοῦ εἶπεν αὐτοῖς Εἰ τὶς θέλει ὀπίσω μού ἀκολουθεῖν ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτόν καί ἀράτω τόν σταυρόν αὐτοῦ καί ἀκολουθείτω μοί)

Although the terms him, himself, and his are masculine, Jesus is using the words in a generic sense that includes both men and women. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use phrases that make this clear. Alternate translation: [let that person deny himself or herself … his or her]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτὸν

˱him˲_˓let˒_renounce (Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί προσκαλεσάμενος τόν ὄχλον σύν τοῖς μαθηταῖς αὐτοῦ εἶπεν αὐτοῖς Εἰ τὶς θέλει ὀπίσω μού ἀκολουθεῖν ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτόν καί ἀράτω τόν σταυρόν αὐτοῦ καί ἀκολουθείτω μοί)

Here, the phrase deny himself refers to a person choosing not to do what they would naturally do. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use a comparable phrase or state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [let him exercise self-control] or [let him choose not to do what he naturally desires]

Note 6 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

ἀράτω τὸν σταυρὸν αὐτοῦ

˱him˲_˓let˒_take_up (Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί προσκαλεσάμενος τόν ὄχλον σύν τοῖς μαθηταῖς αὐτοῦ εἶπεν αὐτοῖς Εἰ τὶς θέλει ὀπίσω μού ἀκολουθεῖν ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτόν καί ἀράτω τόν σταυρόν αὐτοῦ καί ἀκολουθείτω μοί)

Jesus assumes that the disciples will know that the Romans executed some criminals by nailing them to a wooden beam with crossbar that was set upright so that the criminals would slowly suffocate. Jesus also assumes that the disciples will know that the Romans made these criminals carry these wooden crosses through the streets to the place where they were going to be executed. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make some of this information more explicit. Alternate translation: [take up the wooden cross on which he will be executed]

Note 7 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

ἀράτω τὸν σταυρὸν αὐτοῦ

˱him˲_˓let˒_take_up (Some words not found in SR-GNT: Καί προσκαλεσάμενος τόν ὄχλον σύν τοῖς μαθηταῖς αὐτοῦ εἶπεν αὐτοῖς Εἰ τὶς θέλει ὀπίσω μού ἀκολουθεῖν ἀπαρνησάσθω ἑαυτόν καί ἀράτω τόν σταυρόν αὐτοῦ καί ἀκολουθείτω μοί)

Here Jesus speaks of taking up a cross in order to describe people who are ready and willing to suffer and even die because they follow Jesus. Because this figure of speech is connected to how Jesus himself died on a cross, if possible you should preserve the metaphor or express the idea in simile form. Alternate translation: [be ready to suffer, which is like taking up his cross,] or [take up his cross, ready to suffer or die,]