InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Prov C1 C2 C3 C5 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C16 C17 C18 C19 C20 C21 C22 C23 C24 C25 C26 C27 C28 C29 C30 C31
Prov 4 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19 V20 V22 V23 V24 V25 V26 V27
This section begins with the typical introduction (4:20–22). The father/teacher then exhorts his son/student to follow a righteous life. He mentions different parts of the body (ear, heart, mouth, eyes, feet) to emphasize that doing what is right involves the whole person (4:23–27).
Another possible heading for this section is:
Always doing what is right
Notice the parallel parts that are similar in meaning:
21a Do not lose sight of them:
21b keep them within your heart;
Do not lose sight of them;
Keep your(sing) eyes fixed on my words,
Do not forget(sing) my advice, but instead
keep them within your heart.
and make sure that you(sing) place/store them in your mind/heart/liver.
carefully remember(sing) it.
Do not lose sight of them; keep them within your heart: The phrase Do not lose sight of them is identical to 3:21a–b. The phrase keep them within your heart is very similar to 3:1b. Try to keep the figures of eyes or eyesight and heart/mind if possible. If this is not possible, use natural expressions in your language that give the meaning without the figures of speech. For example:
Don’t forget a single word, but think about it all. (CEV)
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor
אַל־יַלִּ֥יזוּ מֵעֵינֶ֑יךָ
not (Some words not found in UHB: not escape from,eyes_of,your keep,them in_the=middle your_heart_of,your )
See how you translated this clause in 3:21.
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy
שָׁ֝מְרֵ֗ם בְּת֣וֹךְ לְבָבֶֽךָ
(Some words not found in UHB: not escape from,eyes_of,your keep,them in_the=middle your_heart_of,your )
See how you translated the same use of heart in 2:2.
Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor
שָׁ֝מְרֵ֗ם בְּת֣וֹךְ לְבָבֶֽךָ
(Some words not found in UHB: not escape from,eyes_of,your keep,them in_the=middle your_heart_of,your )
Here Solomon speaks of remembering something as if someone were keeping it in the midst of his heart. If it would be helpful in your language, you could express the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [always remember them]
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.