OET interlinear 1 SAM 23:20

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / synecdoche

לְ⁠כָל־אַוַּ֨ת נַפְשְׁ⁠ךָ֥

to/from=all/each/any/every (Some words not found in UHB: and=now to/from=all/each/any/every desire_of your_self_of,your the=king to,come_down come_down and_[belongs],to,us to,deliver_him_up in,the_hand_of of,the_king )

The Ziphites are using one part of Saul, his soul, to mean all of him in the act of desiring something. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [according to all of your desire]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

הַסְגִּיר֖⁠וֹ בְּ⁠יַ֥ד הַ⁠מֶּֽלֶךְ

(Some words not found in UHB: and=now to/from=all/each/any/every desire_of your_self_of,your the=king to,come_down come_down and_[belongs],to,us to,deliver_him_up in,the_hand_of of,the_king )

See how you translated this same image in 23:11. Alternate translation: [to surrender him to the king]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / 123person

הַסְגִּיר֖⁠וֹ בְּ⁠יַ֥ד הַ⁠מֶּֽלֶךְ

(Some words not found in UHB: and=now to/from=all/each/any/every desire_of your_self_of,your the=king to,come_down come_down and_[belongs],to,us to,deliver_him_up in,the_hand_of of,the_king )

The Ziphites are addressing Saul respectfully in the third person. If it would be helpful in your language, you could translate this in the second person. Alternate translation: [to enclose him in your hand, O king] or [to surrender him to you, O king]