OET interlinear 1 SAM 23:4

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / hendiadys

וַ⁠יּ֨וֹסֶף ע֤וֹד דָּוִד֙ לִ⁠שְׁאֹ֣ל בַּֽ⁠יהוָ֔ה

and,he_repeated again/more (Some words not found in UHB: and,he_repeated again/more Dāvid to,enquire by,Yahweh and,he,answered_him YHWH and=he/it_said arise go_down Qəˊīlāh that/for/because/then/when I give DOM Pelishtim in,hand_of,your )

Together, the words added and inquire express a single idea. The word added tells in what way David inquired of Yahweh. Alternate translation: [So David inquired of Yahweh yet again]

Note 2 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

ק֚וּם רֵ֣ד קְעִילָ֔ה כִּֽי־אֲנִ֥י נֹתֵ֛ן אֶת־פְּלִשְׁתִּ֖ים בְּ⁠יָדֶֽ⁠ךָ

arise go_down Qəˊīlāh (Some words not found in UHB: and,he_repeated again/more Dāvid to,enquire by,Yahweh and,he,answered_him YHWH and=he/it_said arise go_down Qəˊīlāh that/for/because/then/when I give DOM Pelishtim in,hand_of,your )

If it would be more natural in your language, you could reverse the order of these phrases, since the second phrase gives the reason for the result that the first phrase describes. Alternate translation: [Since I am giving the Philistines into your hand, arise, go down to Keilah]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

ק֚וּם

arise

See how you translated this term in 16:12. Alternate translation: [Take action]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / explicitinfo

רֵ֣ד

go_down

See how you translated the similar expression in 1:3, where the author marks travel for change in elevation. Keilah was at a lower elevation than where David was. Alternate translation: [go]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

בְּ⁠יָדֶֽ⁠ךָ

(Some words not found in UHB: and,he_repeated again/more Dāvid to,enquire by,Yahweh and,he,answered_him YHWH and=he/it_said arise go_down Qəˊīlāh that/for/because/then/when I give DOM Pelishtim in,hand_of,your )

See how you translated this expression in 4:3. Alternate translation: [into your power]