OET interlinear GEN 13:11

uW Translation Notes:

וַ⁠יִּבְחַר־ל֣⁠וֹ ל֗וֹט אֵ֚ת כָּל־כִּכַּ֣ר הַ⁠יַּרְדֵּ֔ן

and,he_chose to=him/it Lōţ DOM all/each/any/every plain_of of,the_Jordan

See how you translated plain of the Jordan in verse 10. Alternate translation: [Then Lot chose the whole Jordan River Plain for himself] or [Then Lot decided to live in the valley that surrounded the Jordan River]

Note 1 topic: writing-pronouns

וַ⁠יִּסַּ֥ע ל֖וֹט

and,he_set_out Lōţ

Consider whether or not it is better in your language to begin a new sentence here. Also consider whether it is better in your language to use Lot’s name or a pronoun to refer to him here. Alternate translation: [and he moved] or [Then Lot left Abram and moved]

מִ⁠קֶּ֑דֶם

from=east

The Hebrew text is ambiguous here. It could mean: (1) “to/toward the east to live there” or “eastward” or (2) “from the east”

Note 2 topic: writing-pronouns

וַ⁠יִּפָּ֣רְד֔וּ אִ֖ישׁ מֵ⁠עַ֥ל אָחִֽי⁠ו

and,they_separated (a)_man from=under his/its=woman

Consider whether or not it is better in your language to begin a new sentence here. Also consider what is the best way to refer to Abram and Lot at this point in the paragraph. Alternate translation: [So in this way they lived separately from each other] or [That is how Abram and Lot began living in separate places]