OET interlinear GEN 30:1

uW Translation Notes:

וַ⁠תֵּ֣רֶא רָחֵ֗ל כִּ֣י לֹ֤א יָֽלְדָה֙ לְ⁠יַעֲקֹ֔ב

(Some words not found in UHB: and=she/it_saw Rāḩēl that/for/because/then/when not she/it_gave_birth to,Jacob and,she_was_jealous Rāḩēl of,sister_of,her and=she/it_said to/near Yaakob come=now! to/for=me children and=if not die I )

Alternate translation: [Now when Rachel saw that she was not able to have any children for Jacob]

וַ⁠תְּקַנֵּ֥א רָחֵ֖ל בַּ⁠אֲחֹתָ֑⁠הּ

(Some words not found in UHB: and=she/it_saw Rāḩēl that/for/because/then/when not she/it_gave_birth to,Jacob and,she_was_jealous Rāḩēl of,sister_of,her and=she/it_said to/near Yaakob come=now! to/for=me children and=if not die I )

Alternate translation: [she was envious of her sister Leah]

Note 1 topic: writing-quotations

וַ⁠תֹּ֤אמֶר אֶֽל־יַעֲקֹב֙

(Some words not found in UHB: and=she/it_saw Rāḩēl that/for/because/then/when not she/it_gave_birth to,Jacob and,she_was_jealous Rāḩēl of,sister_of,her and=she/it_said to/near Yaakob come=now! to/for=me children and=if not die I )

Use a quote margin here in your language that fits the context well. Alternate translation: [and she pleaded with Jacob]

הָֽבָ⁠ה־לִּ֣⁠י בָנִ֔ים וְ⁠אִם־אַ֖יִן

come=now! (Some words not found in UHB: and=she/it_saw Rāḩēl that/for/because/then/when not she/it_gave_birth to,Jacob and,she_was_jealous Rāḩēl of,sister_of,her and=she/it_said to/near Yaakob come=now! to/for=me children and=if not die I )

Alternate translation: [Help me get pregnant! Otherwise]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / hyperbole

מֵתָ֥ה אָנֹֽכִי

die I

Rachel is using an extreme statement to show how desperate and deeply ashamed she feels about not having children. You could include a footnote here in your translation that explains how in that culture it was considered very shameful for a woman to be barren (See: Genesis 30:23). Alternate translation: [I have no reason to live!]