OET interlinear GEN 16:9

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-words-phrases

וַ⁠יֹּ֤אמֶר לָ⁠הּ֙ מַלְאַ֣ךְ יְהוָ֔ה

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said to/for=her/it messenger_of YHWH return to/towards mistress_of,your and,humble_yourself below/instead_of hands_of,her )

Consider what is the best way to begin this verse in your translation after what Hagar said in verse 8. Alternate translation: [The angel told Hagar]

שׁ֖וּבִי אֶל־גְּבִרְתֵּ֑⁠ךְ

return to/towards (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said to/for=her/it messenger_of YHWH return to/towards mistress_of,your and,humble_yourself below/instead_of hands_of,her )

See how you translated mistress in verses 4 and 8. Alternate translation: [Go back to your owner]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

וְ⁠הִתְעַנִּ֖י תַּ֥חַת יָדֶֽי⁠הָ

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said to/for=her/it messenger_of YHWH return to/towards mistress_of,your and,humble_yourself below/instead_of hands_of,her )

The angel is using under her hands as a common expression of this culture to mean “under her authority.” If this phrase does not have that meaning in your language, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. See how you translated a similar idiom in your hand in verse 6. Alternate translation: [and humbly submit yourself to her authority]