OET interlinear DEU 11:14

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-condition-hypothetical

וְ⁠נָתַתִּ֧י

and,I_will_give

This verse continues the hypothetical situation proposed in the previous verse. Use a natural form in your language for introducing the consequence of a situation that could happen.

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

וְ⁠נָתַתִּ֧י מְטַֽר־אַרְצְ⁠כֶ֛ם בְּ⁠עִתּ֖⁠וֹ יוֹרֶ֣ה וּ⁠מַלְק֑וֹשׁ

and,I_will_give rain_of your_land_of,of at,its_appropriate_of,time autumn_rain and,spring_rain

The implication is that Yahweh will cause the rain to fall on the land at the proper times for growing crops. The former rain is the spring rains and the latter rain is the autumn rains. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [I will cause it to rain on your land in the proper seasons, spring and fall]

Note 3 topic: writing-pronouns

וְ⁠נָתַתִּ֧י

and,I_will_give

Here, I refers to Yahweh. Moses is telling the Israelites what Yahweh said. If it would be helpful for your readers, you could use the third-person. Alternate translation: [then Yahweh will give]

Note 4 topic: grammar-collectivenouns

מְטַֽר & דְגָנֶ֔⁠ךָ וְ⁠תִֽירֹשְׁ⁠ךָ֖ וְ⁠יִצְהָרֶֽ⁠ךָ

rain_of & grain_of,your and,your_new_of,wine and,your_fresh_of,oil

In this verse, the words rain, grain, wine, and oil are singular in form, but they refer to all rainfall, crops and produce as a group. If it would be helpful in your language, you could say this plainly, as modeled by the UST.

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / youcrowd

וְ⁠אָסַפְתָּ֣ דְגָנֶ֔⁠ךָ וְ⁠תִֽירֹשְׁ⁠ךָ֖ וְ⁠יִצְהָרֶֽ⁠ךָ

and,you_will_gather grain_of,your and,your_new_of,wine and,your_fresh_of,oil

Even though Moses is speaking to all the Israelites, you and your are singular here. If the singular forms of these pronouns would not be natural in your language, you could use the plural forms in your translation.

Note 6 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

וְ⁠תִֽירֹשְׁ⁠ךָ֖ וְ⁠יִצְהָרֶֽ⁠ךָ

and,your_new_of,wine and,your_fresh_of,oil

The implication is that Yahweh will bless the crops of grapes and olives. Wine is made from grapes and oil is made from olives. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [grapes for your new wine and olive trees for your oil]