OET interlinear PRO 24:18

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

פֶּן־יִרְאֶ֣ה יְ֭הוָה

lest he/it_will_see YHWH

Here, lest indicates that what follows is the result of doing what the writer prohibited in the previous verse. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a result for not obeying a prohibition. Alternate translation: “otherwise, Yahweh will see”

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

יִרְאֶ֣ה יְ֭הוָה

he/it_will_see YHWH

Here, see refers to perceiving something. If it would be helpful in your language, you could express the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “Yahweh perceive”

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

וְ⁠רַ֣ע בְּ⁠עֵינָ֑י⁠ו

and,evil in/on/at/with,eyes_of,his

The phrase evil in his eyes refers to having a negative opinion about something or someone. If it would be helpful in your language, you could express the meaning plainly. See how you translated the similar use of in his eyes in [3:4](../03/04.md). Alternate translation: “and he will think negatively of it”

Note 4 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

וְ⁠הֵשִׁ֖יב

and,turn_~_away

Here, and introduces the result of something being evil in his eyes. Use the most natural way in your language to indicate result. You may need to start a new sentence. Alternate translation: “As a result, he will turn away”

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

וְ⁠הֵשִׁ֖יב מֵ⁠עָלָ֣י⁠ו אַפּֽ⁠וֹ

and,turn_~_away from,against,him anger_of,his

Here, the writer refers to Yahweh ceasing to feel something about someone or to do something to someone as if he were turning away his nose from that person. Here, nose could refer to: (1) anger, as in [15:1](../15/01.md). Alternate translation: “and he ceases from being angry with him” (2) the punishment Yahweh applies to someone with whom he is angry. Alternate translation: “and he ceases punishing him”