OET interlinear PSA 69:24

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / imperative

שְׁפָךְ־עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֥ם זַעְמֶ֑⁠ךָ וַ⁠חֲר֥וֹן אַ֝פְּ⁠ךָ֗ יַשִּׂיגֵֽ⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

This is an imperative, but it communicates a polite request rather than a command. If the imperative does not communicate a polite request for your readers, then use a form in your language that communicates a polite request. It may be helpful to add an expression such as “please” to make this clear. Alternate translation: [Please pour your indignation on them, and let the burning of your nose overtake them]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

שְׁפָךְ־עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֥ם זַעְמֶ֑⁠ךָ וַ⁠חֲר֥וֹן אַ֝פְּ⁠ךָ֗ יַשִּׂיגֵֽ⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

These two phrases mean basically the same thing. The second emphasizes the meaning of the first by repeating the same idea with different words. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could connect the phrases with a word other than and in order to show that the second phrase is repeating the first one, not saying something additional. Alternate translation: [Pour your indignation on them; yes, let the burning of your nose overtake them]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

שְׁפָךְ־עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֥ם זַעְמֶ֑⁠ךָ

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of indignation, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [Deal with them wrathfully]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

וַ⁠חֲר֥וֹן אַ֝פְּ⁠ךָ֗ יַשִּׂיגֵֽ⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

Here, the burning of your nose represents “your fierce anger.” If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: [and let your burning anger overtake them]