PSA 69:24 Parallel Verse View

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ULT Pour out your indignation on them,
⇔ and let the fierceness of your anger overtake them.

UST Become angry with them and punish them!
⇔ Angrily pursue them until you catch them.

BSB Pour out Your wrath upon them,
⇔ and let Your burning anger overtake them.

MSB (Same as BSB above)

OEB Pour your indignation upon them,
⇔ let your burning wrath overtake them.

WEBBE Pour out your indignation on them.
⇔ Let the fierceness of your anger overtake them.

WMBB (Same as above)

NET Pour out your judgment on them!
⇔ May your raging anger overtake them!

LSV Pour Your indignation on them,
And the fierceness of Your anger seizes them.

FBV Pour out your judgment[fn] on them; chase them down in your fierce anger.

69:24 Literally, “indignation.”

T4T Show them that you are very angry with them!
⇔ Because of your great/furious anger, chase after them and catch them.

LEB • Pour out your indignation on them,
• and let your burning anger overtake them.

BBE Let your curse come on them; let the heat of your wrath overtake them.

Moff Vent thine anger on them,
⇔ may thy burning fury seize them,

JPS (69-25) Pour out Thine indignation upon them, and let the fierceness of Thine anger overtake them.

ASV Pour out thine indignation upon them,
⇔ And let the fierceness of thine anger overtake them.

DRA No DRA PSA 69:24 verse available

YLT Pour upon them Thine indignation, And the fierceness of Thine anger doth seize them.

Drby Pour out thine indignation upon them, and let the fierceness of thine anger take hold of them.

RV Pour out thine indignation upon them, and let the fierceness of thine anger overtake them.
(Pour out thine/your indignation upon them, and let the fierceness of thine/your anger overtake them.)

SLT Pour out upon them thy wrath, and the burning of thins anger shall overtake then).

Wbstr Pour out thy indignation upon them, and let thy wrathful anger take hold of them.

KJB-1769 Pour out thine indignation upon them, and let thy wrathful anger take hold of them.
(Pour out thine/your indignation upon them, and let thy/your wrathful anger take hold of them.)

KJB-1611 Powre out thine indignation vpon them, and let thy wrathfull anger take hold of them.
(Modernised spelling is same as from KJB-1769 above)

Bshps Powre out thine indignation vpon them: and let thy wrathfull displeasure take holde of them.
(Pour out thine/your indignation upon them: and let thy/your wrathful displeasure take hold of them.)

Gnva Powre out thine anger vpon them, and let thy wrathfull displeasure take them.
(Pour out thine/your anger upon them, and let thy/your wrathful displeasure take them.)

Cvdl Let their eyes be blynded, that they se not: & euer bowe downe their backes.
(Let their eyes be blinded, that they see not: and ever bow down their backs.)

Wycl No Wycl PSA 69:24 verse available

Luth Ihre Augen müssen finster werden, daß sie nicht sehen; und ihre Lenden laß immer wanken!
(Her eyes must dark become, that they/she/them not see; and their/her lumbar let always wanken!)

ClVg No ClVg PSA 69:24 verse available

UTN uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / imperative

שְׁפָךְ־עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֥ם זַעְמֶ֑⁠ךָ וַ⁠חֲר֥וֹן אַ֝פְּ⁠ךָ֗ יַשִּׂיגֵֽ⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

This is an imperative, but it communicates a polite request rather than a command. If the imperative does not communicate a polite request for your readers, then use a form in your language that communicates a polite request. It may be helpful to add an expression such as “please” to make this clear. Alternate translation: [Please pour your indignation on them, and let the burning of your nose overtake them]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

שְׁפָךְ־עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֥ם זַעְמֶ֑⁠ךָ וַ⁠חֲר֥וֹן אַ֝פְּ⁠ךָ֗ יַשִּׂיגֵֽ⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

These two phrases mean basically the same thing. The second emphasizes the meaning of the first by repeating the same idea with different words. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could connect the phrases with a word other than and in order to show that the second phrase is repeating the first one, not saying something additional. Alternate translation: [Pour your indignation on them; yes, let the burning of your nose overtake them]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

שְׁפָךְ־עֲלֵי⁠הֶ֥ם זַעְמֶ֑⁠ךָ

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of indignation, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [Deal with them wrathfully]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

וַ⁠חֲר֥וֹן אַ֝פְּ⁠ךָ֗ יַשִּׂיגֵֽ⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: darkened eyes_of,their from,seeing and,loins_of,their continually tremble )

Here, the burning of your nose represents “your fierce anger.” If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: [and let your burning anger overtake them]

Parallel PSA 69:24