OET interlinear ISA 34:4

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

וְ⁠נָמַ֨קּוּ֙ כָּל צְבָ֣א הַ⁠שָּׁמַ֔יִם

and,they_will_rot_away all/each/any/every soldier/messenger_of the=heavens

The expression will be dissolved is a passive verbal form. If it would be unnatural to use that form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. Alternate translation: [And all of the army of the heavens will dissolve]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

וְ⁠נָמַ֨קּוּ֙ כָּל צְבָ֣א הַ⁠שָּׁמַ֔יִם

and,they_will_rot_away all/each/any/every soldier/messenger_of the=heavens

Isaiah is speaking as if the stars were the army of the heavens. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [And all of the stars, the army of the heavens, will dissolve]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

וְ⁠נָגֹ֥לּוּ כַ⁠סֵּ֖פֶר הַ⁠שָּׁמָ֑יִם

and,they_will_be_rolled_up like,scroll the=heavens

The expression will be rolled up is a passive verbal form. If it would be unnatural to use that form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. Alternate translation: [and the heavens will roll up like a scroll]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

וְ⁠נָגֹ֥לּוּ כַ⁠סֵּ֖פֶר הַ⁠שָּׁמָ֑יִם

and,they_will_be_rolled_up like,scroll the=heavens

The point of this comparison is that just as a scroll is rolled up so that it can no longer be seen, so the heavens will vanish from sight. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [and the heavens will vanish from sight just as a scroll is rolled up and can no longer be seen]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

וְ⁠כָל צְבָאָ֣⁠ם יִבּ֔וֹל כִּ⁠נְבֹ֤ל עָלֶה֙ מִ⁠גֶּ֔פֶן וּ⁠כְ⁠נֹבֶ֖לֶת מִ⁠תְּאֵנָֽה

and=all their=group/army/objects wither as,withers leaf from,a_vine and,like,withered_fruit from,a_fig_tree

The point of this comparison is that just as a leaf withers and falls from a vine, so all of their army will fade away and disappear. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [and all of their army will wither and disappear just as a leaf withers and falls from a vine and just as leaves wither and fall from a fig tree]

Note 6 topic: writing-pronouns

וְ⁠כָל צְבָאָ֣⁠ם יִבּ֔וֹל

and=all their=group/army/objects wither

The pronoun their refers to the heavens. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [and all of the army of the heavens will wither]