OET interlinear ISA 34:5

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

The word translated as For indicates that what Yahweh says here is a reason for what came before. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a reason for what came before. Alternate translation: [This is because]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / personification

רִוְּתָ֥ה בַ⁠שָּׁמַ֖יִם חַרְבִּ֑⁠י

drunk_~_fill in=the_heavens sword_of,my

Yahweh is speaking of my sword as if it were a living thing that could have slaked its thirst until it was satisfied. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [my sword has slaked its thirst for blood in the heavens]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / possession

עַ֥ם חֶרְמִ֖⁠י לְ⁠מִשְׁפָּֽט

people my_total_destruction_of,my for,judgment

Yahweh is using the possessive form to describe a people that is characterized by my devoting to judgment. If a speaker of your language would not use the possessive form for this, you could express this idea in another way. Alternate translation: [the people whom I have devoted to judgment]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

עַ֥ם חֶרְמִ֖⁠י לְ⁠מִשְׁפָּֽט

people my_total_destruction_of,my for,judgment

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of judgment, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [the people I will judge by anihilating them]