OET interlinear PSA 68:14

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-time-simultaneous

בְּ⁠פָ֘רֵ֤שׂ שַׁדַּ֓י מְלָ֘כִ֤ים בָּ֗⁠הּ תַּשְׁלֵ֥ג בְּ⁠צַלְמֽוֹן

(Some words not found in UHB: if you(pl),will_lie_down between sheepfolds wings_of dove covered with,silver and,pinions_of,its with,greenish_of gold )

The word When indicates that the scattering of kings and the snowfall on Zalmon happened at the same time. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could describe the time relationship more explicitly. Alternate translation: [As Shaddai scattered kings in it, it snowed on Zalmon]

Note 2 topic: writing-pronouns

בָּ֗⁠הּ

(Some words not found in UHB: if you(pl),will_lie_down between sheepfolds wings_of dove covered with,silver and,pinions_of,its with,greenish_of gold )

The pronoun it refers to the land, the region where the battle took place. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [in the place where the enemy army had assembled]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

תַּשְׁלֵ֥ג בְּ⁠צַלְמֽוֹן

(Some words not found in UHB: if you(pl),will_lie_down between sheepfolds wings_of dove covered with,silver and,pinions_of,its with,greenish_of gold )

Here the psalmist is speaking as if the whitened, fleeing armies were it snowed on Zalmon, comparing their scattered flight to snowfall blanketing a dark mountain. Your language may have a comparable expression that you can use in your translation, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [the battlefield was white, like snow on Zalmon]