OET interlinear PSA 68:1

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / imperative3p

יָק֣וּם אֱ֭לֹהִים יָפ֣וּצוּ אוֹיְבָ֑י⁠ו וְ⁠יָנ֥וּסוּ מְ֝שַׂנְאָ֗י⁠ו

(Some words not found in UHB: to,choirmaster of,David song song )

By using Let, the psalmist is expressing his wish or prayer. See the discussion in the introduction to this book about “let” and “may” and follow the decision of your team of how a speaker will express in this context what he wants someone to do. Alternate translation: [I desire that God should arise and make his enemies scatter and the ones hating him flee]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

יָפ֣וּצוּ אוֹיְבָ֑י⁠ו וְ⁠יָנ֥וּסוּ מְ֝שַׂנְאָ֗י⁠ו מִ⁠פָּנָֽי⁠ו

(Some words not found in UHB: to,choirmaster of,David song song )

These two phrases let his enemies scatter and let the ones hating him flee from his face mean basically the same thing. The second emphasizes the meaning of the first by repeating the same idea with different words. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could combine them and express the emphasis in another way. Another approach would be to connect the phrases with a word that shows that the second phrase is repeating the first one, not saying something additional. See how you as a team have decided to translate the parallel phrases in the Psalms, and follow that approach here and throughout this psalm. Alternate translation: [may all who oppose him scatter and flee]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

מִ⁠פָּנָֽי⁠ו

(Some words not found in UHB: to,choirmaster of,David song song )

Here, from his face represents being away from God’s presence. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: [from before him]