OET interlinear 1 SAM 15:24

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

חָטָ֔אתִי כִּֽי־עָבַ֥רְתִּי אֶת־פִּֽי־יְהוָ֖ה וְ⁠אֶת־דְּבָרֶ֑י⁠ךָ כִּ֤י יָרֵ֨אתִי֙ אֶת־הָ⁠עָ֔ם וָ⁠אֶשְׁמַ֖ע בְּ⁠קוֹלָֽ⁠ם

sinned (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Shāʼūl/(Saul) to/towards Shəmū^ʼēl/(Samuel) sinned that/for/because/then/when transgressed DOM command_of YHWH and=DOM words_of,your that/for/because/then/when feared DOM the,people and,I_listened to,voice_of,their )

If it would be more natural in your language, you could reverse the order of these phrases, since the second phrase gives the reason for the result that the first phrase describes. Alternate translation: [Because I feared the people and listened to their voice, I have crossed over the mouth of Yahweh and your words, and so I have sinned]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

עָבַ֥רְתִּי

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Shāʼūl/(Saul) to/towards Shəmū^ʼēl/(Samuel) sinned that/for/because/then/when transgressed DOM command_of YHWH and=DOM words_of,your that/for/because/then/when feared DOM the,people and,I_listened to,voice_of,their )

Saul is speaking as if Yahweh’s commands were a boundary that he had physically crossed. Your language may have a comparable expression that you could use in your translation. You could also use plain language. Alternate translation: [I have gone beyond] or [I have disobeyed]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

אֶת־פִּֽי־יְהוָ֖ה וְ⁠אֶת־דְּבָרֶ֑י⁠ךָ

DOM DOM (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Shāʼūl/(Saul) to/towards Shəmū^ʼēl/(Samuel) sinned that/for/because/then/when transgressed DOM command_of YHWH and=DOM words_of,your that/for/because/then/when feared DOM the,people and,I_listened to,voice_of,their )

Saul is using the terms mouth and words to represent what Yahweh commanded by using his mouth, which Samuel relayed by using words. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: [what Yahweh told me to do and what you said I should do]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

וָ⁠אֶשְׁמַ֖ע בְּ⁠קוֹלָֽ⁠ם

(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_said Shāʼūl/(Saul) to/towards Shəmū^ʼēl/(Samuel) sinned that/for/because/then/when transgressed DOM command_of YHWH and=DOM words_of,your that/for/because/then/when feared DOM the,people and,I_listened to,voice_of,their )

See how you translated the similar expression in 15:1. Alternate translation: [and did what they urged me to do]