OET interlinear 1 SAM 2:19

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: translate-plural

מִ⁠יָּמִ֣ים ׀ יָמִ֑ימָ⁠ה

(Some words not found in UHB: and,a_robe little you(ms)_will_make for=him/it his/its=mother and,she_brought_it_up to=him/it from=days to=days when,she,went_up DOM her/its=husband/man to,sacrifice DOM sacrifice_of the=days )

See how you translated the similar expression in 1:3. Alternate translation: [from year to year]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicitinfo

בַּֽ⁠עֲלוֹתָ⁠הּ֙

(Some words not found in UHB: and,a_robe little you(ms)_will_make for=him/it his/its=mother and,she_brought_it_up to=him/it from=days to=days when,she,went_up DOM her/its=husband/man to,sacrifice DOM sacrifice_of the=days )

See the discussion in the Introduction to 1 Samuel of how Hebrew speakers and writers marked travel for change in elevation, and see how you translated the comparable expression in 1:3. Alternate translation: [in her coming] or [when she came]

Note 3 topic: writing-poetry

לִ⁠זְבֹּ֖חַ אֶת־זֶ֥בַח הַ⁠יָּמִֽים

(Some words not found in UHB: and,a_robe little you(ms)_will_make for=him/it his/its=mother and,she_brought_it_up to=him/it from=days to=days when,she,went_up DOM her/its=husband/man to,sacrifice DOM sacrifice_of the=days )

The author is using a construction in which a verb and its object come from the same root. You may be able to use the same construction in your language to express the meaning here. Alternatively, your language may have another way of saying this. Alternate translation: [to offer the sacrifice of the days] or [to offer the yearly sacrifice]