OET interlinear EXO 15:1

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

גָאֹ֣ה גָּאָ֔ה

to_be_exalted (Some words not found in UHB: then sang Mosheh and=the_sons Yisrael DOM the,song (the),this to/for=YHWH and=they_said to=say sing to/for=YHWH that/for/because/then/when to_be_exalted he_is_exalted horse and,rider_of,its hurled in,sea )

If it would be helpful to your readers, you could state explicitly over whom Yahweh triumphed. Alternate translation: [he has achieved a glorious victory over the army of Egypt]

גָאֹ֣ה גָּאָ֔ה

to_be_exalted (Some words not found in UHB: then sang Mosheh and=the_sons Yisrael DOM the,song (the),this to/for=YHWH and=they_said to=say sing to/for=YHWH that/for/because/then/when to_be_exalted he_is_exalted horse and,rider_of,its hurled in,sea )

Alternate translation: [he is highly exalted] or [he is extremely high] or [he is exaltedly exalted]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

ס֥וּס וְ⁠רֹכְב֖⁠וֹ רָמָ֥ה בַ⁠יָּֽם

horse and,rider_of,its hurled (Some words not found in UHB: then sang Mosheh and=the_sons Yisrael DOM the,song (the),this to/for=YHWH and=they_said to=say sing to/for=YHWH that/for/because/then/when to_be_exalted he_is_exalted horse and,rider_of,its hurled in,sea )

Moses sang about God causing the sea to cover and drown the horse and rider as if God had thrown them into the sea. If your readers would not understand what this image means in this context, you could use an equivalent metaphor from your culture. Alternatively, you could express the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [he has made the horse and rider drown in the sea]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / genericnoun

ס֥וּס וְ⁠רֹכְב֖⁠וֹ

horse and,rider_of,its

This refers to many or all of the Egyptian horses and riders that were chasing the Israelites. Alternate translation: [the horses and their riders]

וְ⁠רֹכְב֖⁠וֹ

and,rider_of,its

Here, rider could either refer to a person who sits on a horse or who travels in a chariot that a horse is pulling.