OET interlinear EXO 30:14

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

כֹּ֗ל הָ⁠עֹבֵר֙ עַל־הַ⁠פְּקֻדִ֔ים

(Some words not found in UHB: all (the)_[one,who]_passes_over on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in [those],enrolled from,a_son_of twenty year and,upward,upwards he/it_gave contribution_of YHWH )

This is an idiom that suggests that the men were counted by walking past someone who was counting people as they walked by. It is the same phrase as in the [previous verse](../30/13.md). Alternate translation: [Everyone counted]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

מִ⁠בֶּ֛ן עֶשְׂרִ֥ים שָׁנָ֖ה

(Some words not found in UHB: all (the)_[one,who]_passes_over on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in [those],enrolled from,a_son_of twenty year and,upward,upwards he/it_gave contribution_of YHWH )

This is an idiom that refers to age. See the UST and how you translated the same idiom in [7:7](../07/07.md).

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / metaphor

מִ⁠בֶּ֛ן עֶשְׂרִ֥ים שָׁנָ֖ה וָ⁠מָ֑עְלָ⁠ה

(Some words not found in UHB: all (the)_[one,who]_passes_over on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in [those],enrolled from,a_son_of twenty year and,upward,upwards he/it_gave contribution_of YHWH )

Larger numbers are spoken of as being up or above smaller numbers. If your readers would not understand what this image means in this context, you could use an equivalent metaphor from your culture. Alternatively, you could express the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [from twenty years old and more] or [who is twenty years old or older]