OET interlinear ISA 17:5

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

וְ⁠הָיָ֗ה כֶּֽ⁠אֱסֹף֙ קָצִ֣יר קָמָ֔ה

and=it_was as,gathers reaper standing_grain

The point of this comparison is that just as a harvester strips a field bare when gathering standing grain, so the judgment will strip Israel of its people and wealth. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly. Alternate translation: [And Israel will be stripped clean, as when a harvester gathers the standing grain]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

וְ⁠הָיָ֗ה כֶּֽ⁠אֱסֹף֙ קָצִ֣יר קָמָ֔ה וּ⁠זְרֹע֖⁠וֹ שִׁבֳּלִ֣ים יִקְצ֑וֹר וְ⁠הָיָ֛ה כִּ⁠מְלַקֵּ֥ט שִׁבֳּלִ֖ים בְּ⁠עֵ֥מֶק רְפָאִֽים

and=it_was as,gathers reaper standing_grain and,arm_of,his ears harvests and=it_was like,[one_who]_gathers ears_of_grain in,the_valley_of Rəfāʼīm

See how your translation team has decided to represent pairs of clauses in Hebrew poetry that mean basically the same thing. Alternate translation: [And it will be like a harvester gathering standing grain, and his arm reaps heads of grain; indeed, it will be like the gleaning of heads of grain in the Valley of the Raphaites]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / simile

וְ⁠הָיָ֛ה כִּ⁠מְלַקֵּ֥ט שִׁבֳּלִ֖ים בְּ⁠עֵ֥מֶק רְפָאִֽים

and=it_was like,[one_who]_gathers ears_of_grain in,the_valley_of Rəfāʼīm

The point of this comparison is that just as the gleaning of heads of grain in the Valley of the Raphaites leaves a field completely bare, so the judgment will leave very few people remaining in Israel. If it would be helpful in your language, you could make this point explicitly.