InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
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People tagged in the matching LV passage: Amraphel · Arioch (king of Ellasar) · Chedorlaomer · Tidal
Places tagged in the matching LV passage: Elam (GEN 14:1) · Ellasar · Shinar
OET-LV With Kedorlaomer the_king_of ˊĒylām and_Tidˊāl the_king_of Gōy and_Amraphel the_king_of Shinˊār and_ʼArəyōk the_king_of Ellasar four kings with the_five.
OET (OET-RV) against Kedorla’omer king of Eylam, Tid’al king of Goyim, Amrafel king of Shin’ar, Areyok king of Elasar—five kings defending themselves against the four.
Note 1 topic: translate-names
אֵ֣ת כְּדָרְלָעֹ֜מֶר מֶ֣לֶךְ
DOM (Some words not found in UHB: DOM Chedorlaomer king ˊĒylām and,Tidal king Goiim and,Amraphel king Shinˊār and,Arioch king Ellasar four kings DOM the,five )
The same kings (and the places they ruled) that are listed here in verse 9 are listed in verse 1, but in a different order. Be consistent here with how you spelled the names there. Alternate translation: [against Chedorlaomer who was the ruler over] or [against King Chedorlaomer who was ruling]
עֵילָ֗ם
ˊĒylām
Alternate translation: [the region of Elam]
וְתִדְעָל֙ מֶ֣לֶךְ
and,Tidal king
Alternate translation: [Tidal who was the ruler over] or [King Tidal who was ruling]
גּוֹיִ֔ם
Goiim
Be consistent here with how you translated this people group name in verse 1. Alternate translation: [the Goyim people]
וְאַמְרָפֶל֙ מֶ֣לֶךְ
and,Amraphel king
Alternate translation: [Amraphel who was the ruler over] or [King Amraphel, who was ruling]
שִׁנְעָ֔ר
(Some words not found in UHB: DOM Chedorlaomer king ˊĒylām and,Tidal king Goiim and,Amraphel king Shinˊār and,Arioch king Ellasar four kings DOM the,five )
Alternate translation: [the region of Shinar]
וְאַרְי֖וֹךְ מֶ֣לֶךְ
and,Arioch king
Alternate translation: [and Arioch, who was the ruler over] or [and King Arioch, who was ruling]
אֶלָּסָ֑ר
(Some words not found in UHB: DOM Chedorlaomer king ˊĒylām and,Tidal king Goiim and,Amraphel king Shinˊār and,Arioch king Ellasar four kings DOM the,five )
Alternate translation: [the city of Ellasar]
אַרְבָּעָ֥ה מְלָכִ֖ים אֶת
(Some words not found in UHB: DOM Chedorlaomer king ˊĒylām and,Tidal king Goiim and,Amraphel king Shinˊār and,Arioch king Ellasar four kings DOM the,five )
Alternate translation: [It was four kings who started fighting against] or [Then those four kings attacked]
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit
הַחֲמִשָּֽׁה
(Some words not found in UHB: DOM Chedorlaomer king ˊĒylām and,Tidal king Goiim and,Amraphel king Shinˊār and,Arioch king Ellasar four kings DOM the,five )
It is implied in verse 10 that the four kings were gaining the victory over the five kings. If that is not clear, you could make that explicit here.
OET-LV With Kedorlaomer the_king_of ˊĒylām and_Tidˊāl the_king_of Gōy and_Amraphel the_king_of Shinˊār and_ʼArəyōk the_king_of Ellasar four kings with the_five.
OET (OET-RV) against Kedorla’omer king of Eylam, Tid’al king of Goyim, Amrafel king of Shin’ar, Areyok king of Elasar—five kings defending themselves against the four.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.