InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Exo C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C16 C17 C18 C19 C20 C21 C22 C23 C24 C25 C26 C27 C28 C29 C30 C31 C32 C33 C35 C36 C37 C38 C39 C40
Exo 34 V1 V2 V3 V4 V5 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19 V20 V21 V22 V23 V24 V25 V26 V27 V28 V29 V30 V31 V32 V33 V34 V35
OET-LV Take_heed to/for_yourself(m) lest you_should_make a_covenant to_the_inhabitant[s]_of the_earth/land which you are_about_to_go on/upon_it(f) lest he_should_become (into)_a_snare in_midst_of_your.
OET (OET-RV) Be very careful not to make any treaties with any of the current inhabitants of the land that you’re about to enter, in case it ends up trapping you.
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / rpronouns
לְךָ֗
to/for=yourself(m)
Here, yourself means that each Israelite should guard against committing these sins.
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / hypo
פֶּן־תִּכְרֹ֤ת בְּרִית֙ לְיוֹשֵׁ֣ב הָאָ֔רֶץ אֲשֶׁ֥ר אַתָּ֖ה בָּ֣א עָלֶ֑יהָ פֶּן־יִהְיֶ֥ה לְמוֹקֵ֖שׁ בְּקִרְבֶּֽךָ
(Some words not found in UHB: careful to/for=yourself(m) lest make treaty to,the_inhabitant[s]_of the=earth/land which/who you(ms) he/it_came on/upon=it(f) lest will_belong (into)_a,snare in,midst_of,your )
This sentence contains two hypotheticals as a warning. Each is introduced by lest. Use a marker in your language that introduces a hypothetical situation, but also see the next note. Alternate translation: [If you were to cut a covenant with the inhabitant of the land where you are about to go into, probably he would become as a trap in your midst.]
Note 3 topic: grammar-connect-condition-hypothetical
פֶּן־תִּכְרֹ֤ת בְּרִית֙ לְיוֹשֵׁ֣ב הָאָ֔רֶץ אֲשֶׁ֥ר אַתָּ֖ה בָּ֣א עָלֶ֑יהָ פֶּן־יִהְיֶ֥ה לְמוֹקֵ֖שׁ בְּקִרְבֶּֽךָ
(Some words not found in UHB: careful to/for=yourself(m) lest make treaty to,the_inhabitant[s]_of the=earth/land which/who you(ms) he/it_came on/upon=it(f) lest will_belong (into)_a,snare in,midst_of,your )
The second of these hypothetical statements is logically dependent on and follows after the first as a result. As you mark these hypotheticals, use a form that communicates that the second is a result of the first. Alternate translation: [because if you cut a covenant with the inhabitant of the land where you are about to go into, then he will become as a trap in your midst]
Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom
תִּכְרֹ֤ת בְּרִית֙
(Some words not found in UHB: careful to/for=yourself(m) lest make treaty to,the_inhabitant[s]_of the=earth/land which/who you(ms) he/it_came on/upon=it(f) lest will_belong (into)_a,snare in,midst_of,your )
See how you translated this in 34:10.
Note 5 topic: grammar-collectivenouns
לְיוֹשֵׁ֣ב & יִהְיֶ֥ה
(Some words not found in UHB: careful to/for=yourself(m) lest make treaty to,the_inhabitant[s]_of the=earth/land which/who you(ms) he/it_came on/upon=it(f) lest will_belong (into)_a,snare in,midst_of,your )
The word inhabitant is a singular noun that refers to any individual inhabitant or group of inhabitants from the peoples mentioned in the previous verse. The pronoun he is agreeing with that singular noun. If your language does not use singular nouns in that way, you can use a different expression. Alternate translation: [with the inhabitants of … they become]
Note 6 topic: figures-of-speech / simile
פֶּן־יִהְיֶ֥ה לְמוֹקֵ֖שׁ בְּקִרְבֶּֽךָ
(Some words not found in UHB: careful to/for=yourself(m) lest make treaty to,the_inhabitant[s]_of the=earth/land which/who you(ms) he/it_came on/upon=it(f) lest will_belong (into)_a,snare in,midst_of,your )
People who tempt others to sin are spoken of as if they were a trap. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent comparison or express this meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [lest those remaining people tempt you to sin]
OET-LV Take_heed to/for_yourself(m) lest you_should_make a_covenant to_the_inhabitant[s]_of the_earth/land which you are_about_to_go on/upon_it(f) lest he_should_become (into)_a_snare in_midst_of_your.
OET (OET-RV) Be very careful not to make any treaties with any of the current inhabitants of the land that you’re about to enter, in case it ends up trapping you.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.