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People tagged in the matching LV passage: Cain
OET-LV And_near/to Qayin/(Cain) and_near/to his/its_donation/offering not he_looked and_it_glowed/burnt to/for_Qayin/(Cain) exceedingly and_ his/its_faces/face _they_fell.
OET (OET-RV) but he didn’t even look towards Kayin and his offering. Kayin got very angry and his face showed his displeasure.
וְאֶל־קַ֥יִן & לֹ֣א שָׁעָ֑ה
and=near/to Qayin/(Cain) & not (Some words not found in UHB: and=near/to Qayin/(Cain) and=near/to his/its=donation/offering not he/it_looked/gazed and=it_glowed/burnt to/for=Qayin/(Cain) very and=they_fell his/its=faces/face )
See how you translated “looked favorably on” in the previous verse. Alternate translation: [But Yahweh was not happy with Cain] or [However, he did not accept Cain]
וְאֶל־מִנְחָת֖וֹ
and=near/to and=near/to his/its=donation/offering
Alternate translation: [and his gift] or [and what he gave to him]
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom
וַיִּ֤חַר לְקַ֨יִן֙ מְאֹ֔ד
(Some words not found in UHB: and=near/to Qayin/(Cain) and=near/to his/its=donation/offering not he/it_looked/gazed and=it_glowed/burnt to/for=Qayin/(Cain) very and=they_fell his/its=faces/face )
Many languages have a similar common expression that fits well here. Alternate translation: [So Cain was extremely angry]
Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom
וַֽיִּפְּל֖וּ פָּנָֽיו
(Some words not found in UHB: and=near/to Qayin/(Cain) and=near/to his/its=donation/offering not he/it_looked/gazed and=it_glowed/burnt to/for=Qayin/(Cain) very and=they_fell his/its=faces/face )
Alternate translation: [and his face showed that he was angry] or [and he scowled] or [and his face showed it]
OET-LV And_near/to Qayin/(Cain) and_near/to his/its_donation/offering not he_looked and_it_glowed/burnt to/for_Qayin/(Cain) exceedingly and_ his/its_faces/face _they_fell.
OET (OET-RV) but he didn’t even look towards Kayin and his offering. Kayin got very angry and his face showed his displeasure.
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.