OET interlinear ISA 22:11

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-contrast

וּ⁠מִקְוָ֣ה עֲשִׂיתֶ֗ם בֵּ֚ין הַ⁠חֹ֣מֹתַ֔יִם לְ⁠מֵ֖י הַ⁠בְּרֵכָ֣ה הַ⁠יְשָׁנָ֑ה וְ⁠לֹ֤א הִבַּטְתֶּם֙ אֶל עֹשֶׂ֔י⁠הָ וְ⁠יֹצְרָ֥⁠הּ מֵֽ⁠רָח֖וֹק לֹ֥א רְאִיתֶֽם

and,a_reservoir made between the_two,walls for,the_water_of of,the_pool (the),old and=not look to/towards the_[one_of,who]_made_it and,the_[one_of,who]_planned_it from,distant_[time] not see

The word translated as But indicates a contrast between what came before and what follows. Use a connector in your language that makes this contrast clear. Alternate translation: [And you made a reservoir between the two walls for the waters of the old pool. Yet you did not look to its maker, and you did not regard the one having formed it long ago]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / parallelism

וְ⁠לֹ֤א הִבַּטְתֶּם֙ אֶל־ עֹשֶׂ֔י⁠הָ וְ⁠יֹצְרָ֥⁠הּ מֵֽ⁠רָח֖וֹק לֹ֥א רְאִיתֶֽם

and=not look to/towards the_[one_of,who]_made_it and,the_[one_of,who]_planned_it from,distant_[time] not see

See how your translation team has decided to represent pairs of clauses in Hebrew poetry that mean basically the same thing. Alternate translation: [But you did not look to its maker; no, you did not regard the one having formed it long ago]

Note 3 topic: writing-pronouns

עֹשֶׂ֔י⁠הָ

the_[one_of,who]_made_it

The pronoun its refers to the pool of water. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [the maker of the pool of water]