OET interlinear ISA 9:5

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-logic-result

כִּ֤י

that/for/because/then/when

The word translated as For indicates that what follows is a reason for what came before. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a reason for what came before. Alternate translation: [Because]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / hyperbole

כָל־סְאוֹן֙ סֹאֵ֣ן בְּ⁠רַ֔עַשׁ

all boot warrior with,shaking

Isaiah says every boot of one booting in commotion as an extreme statement for emphasis. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use a different way to express the emphasis. Alternate translation: [every last boot of every soldier marching in the tumult]

Note 3 topic: writing-poetry

כָל־סְאוֹן֙ סֹאֵ֣ן

all boot warrior

Isaiah is using a construction in which a verb and its object come from the same root. You may be able to use the same construction in your language to express the meaning here. Alternatively, your language may have another way of saying this. Alternate translation: [every single boot worn by a soldier marching]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

וְ⁠שִׂמְלָ֖ה מְגוֹלָלָ֣ה בְ⁠דָמִ֑ים

and,cloak rolled in,blood(s)

The expression the garment rolled in blood is a passive verbal form. If it would be unnatural to use that form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. Alternate translation: [and the garment that blood had soaked]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

לִ⁠שְׂרֵפָ֖ה

to=burning

If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of burning, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: [burned]