OET interlinear ISA 9:21

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / ellipsis

מְנַשֶּׁ֣ה אֶת־אֶפְרַ֗יִם וְ⁠אֶפְרַ֨יִם֙ אֶת־מְנַשֶּׁ֔ה

Mənashsheh DOM ʼEfrayim and,Ephraim DOM Mənashsheh

Isaiah is leaving out some of the words that in many languages a sentence would need in order to be complete. You can supply these words from the context if that would be clearer in your language. Alternate translation: [Manasseh will attack Ephraim; and Ephraim will attack Manasseh]

Note 2 topic: writing-pronouns

לֹא־שָׁ֣ב אַפּ֔⁠וֹ וְ⁠ע֖וֹד יָד֥⁠וֹ נְטוּיָֽה

not turned_away anger_of,his and,still his/its=hand stretched_out

In both uses, the pronoun his refers to Yahweh. It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [The wrath of Yahweh continues to burn, and Yahweh continues to use his power for judgment]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

לֹא־שָׁ֣ב אַפּ֔⁠וֹ

not turned_away anger_of,his

See how you translated the similar expression in 9:12.

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / doublenegatives

לֹא־שָׁ֣ב

not turned_away

This is a double negative, consisting of the negative particle not and the negative word turned back. If it would be clearer in your language, you could use a positive expression to translate this. Alternate translation: [He wrath remains hot]

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

וְ⁠ע֖וֹד יָד֥⁠וֹ נְטוּיָֽה

and,still his/its=hand stretched_out

See how you translated the similar expression in 9:12.