OET interlinear ISA 2:21

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: grammar-connect-time-simultaneous

לָ⁠בוֹא֙ בְּ⁠נִקְר֣וֹת הַ⁠צֻּרִ֔ים וּ⁠בִ⁠סְעִפֵ֖י הַ⁠סְּלָעִ֑ים מִ⁠פְּנֵ֞י פַּ֤חַד יְהוָה֙ וּ⁠מֵ⁠הֲדַ֣ר גְּאוֹנ֔⁠וֹ בְּ⁠קוּמ֖⁠וֹ לַ⁠עֲרֹ֥ץ הָ⁠אָֽרֶץ

to,go in,the_clefts_of of,the_rocks and,in,the_clefts_of of,the_cliffs from=face/in_front_of terror_of YHWH and,from,the_splendor_of his_majesty_of,his when,arises,he to,terrify the=earth/land

The word that the ULT translates as when indicates that Yahweh arises to terrify the earth at the same time as the people come into crevices of rocks and into clefts of crags. If it would be helpful to your readers, you could describe the time relationship more explicitly. Alternate translation: [to come into crevices of rocks and into clefts of crags from the face of the terror of Yahweh and from the splendor of his majesty at the same time that he arises to terrify the earth]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

מִ⁠פְּנֵ֞י פַּ֤חַד יְהוָה֙

from=face/in_front_of terror_of YHWH

See how you translated the similar expression in 2:10.

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

פַּ֤חַד יְהוָה֙ וּ⁠מֵ⁠הֲדַ֣ר גְּאוֹנ֔⁠וֹ

terror_of YHWH and,from,the_splendor_of his_majesty_of,his

See how you translated the similar expression in 2:10.

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

בְּ⁠קוּמ֖⁠וֹ

when,arises,he

See how you translated the similar expression in 2:19.

Note 5 topic: figures-of-speech / metonymy

לַ⁠עֲרֹ֥ץ הָ⁠אָֽרֶץ

to,terrify the=earth/land

See how you translated the similar expression in 2:19.