OET interlinear ISA 14:3

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: writing-newevent

וְ⁠הָיָ֗ה

and=it_was

Isaiah is using the phrase translated as it will happen to introduce a new event in the story. Use a word, phrase, or other method in your language that is natural for introducing a new event. See how you translated the similar expression in [10:12](../10/12.md).

Note 2 topic: grammar-connect-time-sequential

וְ⁠הָיָ֗ה בְּ⁠י֨וֹם הָנִ֤יחַ יְהוָה֙ לְ⁠ךָ֔ מֵֽ⁠עָצְבְּ⁠ךָ֖ וּ⁠מֵ⁠רָגְזֶ֑⁠ךָ וּ⁠מִן־הָ⁠עֲבֹדָ֥ה הַ⁠קָּשָׁ֖ה אֲשֶׁ֥ר עֻבַּד־בָּֽ⁠ךְ

and=it_was in/on=day gives_~_rest YHWH to/for=yourself(m) from,pain_of,your and,from,turmoil_of,your and=from the,labor (the),hard which/who made_to_serve on/over=you(fs)

This event does not happen right away but only after Yahweh gives the Israelites rest from their suffering. Your language may have a connecting phrase that you can use to show this. Alternate translation: [After Yahweh gives rest to you from your pain and from your turmoil and from the hard service that was imposed on you]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / abstractnouns

מֵֽ⁠עָצְבְּ⁠ךָ֖ וּ⁠מֵ⁠רָגְזֶ֑⁠ךָ

from,pain_of,your and,from,turmoil_of,your

If your language does not use abstract nouns for the ideas of pain and turmoil, you could express the same ideas in other ways. Alternate translation: [from being hurt and from being troubled]

Note 4 topic: figures-of-speech / activepassive

עֻבַּד

made_to_serve

The expression was imposed is a passive verbal form. If it would be unnatural to use that form, you could express the idea in active form or in another way that is natural in your language. If you need to say who does the action, the context indicates that it is Babylon. Alternate translation: [that Babylon imposed on you]

Note 5 topic: writing-poetry

הָ⁠עֲבֹדָ֥ה הַ⁠קָּשָׁ֖ה אֲשֶׁ֥ר עֻבַּד

the,labor (the),hard which/who made_to_serve

Isaiah is using a construction in which a verb and its object come from the same root. You may be able to use the same construction in your language to express the meaning here. Alternatively, your language may have another way of saying this. See how the UST models this.