InterlinearVerse GEN EXO LEV NUM DEUT JOB YEHO (JOS) HERO (JDG) RUTH 1 SAM 2 SAM PSA AMOS HOS 1 KI 2 KI 1 CHR 2 CHR PROV ECC SNG YOEL (JOEL) MIC ISA ZEP HAB YIR (JER) LAM YNA (JNA) NAH OBAD DAN EZEK EZRA EST NEH HAG ZEC MAL 2 PS WIS TOB MAN BAR G DAN G ESD L ESD ESG JDT 3 MAC SIR 1 MAC 2 MAC 4 MAC YHN (JHN) MARK MAT LUKE ACTs YAC (JAM) GAL 1 TH 2 TH 1 COR 2 COR ROM COL LAOD PHM EPH PHP 1 TIM TIT 1 PET 2 PET 2 TIM HEB YUD (JUD) 1 YHN (1 JHN) 2 YHN (2 JHN) 3 YHN (3 JHN) REV
InterlinearVerse Gen C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10 C11 C12 C13 C14 C15 C16 C17 C18 C19 C20 C21 C22 C23 C24 C25 C26 C27 C28 C29 C30 C31 C33 C34 C35 C36 C37 C38 C39 C40 C41 C42 C43 C44 C45 C46 C47 C48 C49 C50
Gen 32 V1 V2 V3 V4 V6 V7 V8 V9 V10 V11 V12 V13 V14 V15 V16 V17 V18 V19 V20 V21 V22 V23 V24 V25 V26 V27 V28 V29 V30 V31 V32
OET-LV (GEN 32:6) [fn] And_he/it_was to_me ox[en] and_donkey[s] flock[s] and_male_servants and_female_servant[s] and_I_have_sent to_announce to_master_of_my to_find favour in_eyes_of_your.
32:6 Note: KJB: Gen.32.5
OET (OET-RV) Now I have cattle and donkeys, flocks, and male and female slaves. And I’ve sent these messengers to speak with my master, so that I’ll find favour in your eyes.” ’ ”
Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / quotesinquotes
וַֽיְהִי־לִי֙
and=he/it_was to=me
Consider whether it is more natural to use a direct or indirect quote here in your language. Alternate translation: [I now have] or [Also tell him that I own]
שׁ֣וֹר וַחֲמ֔וֹר צֹ֖אן
oxen and,donkey[s] flock_of_sheep/goats
See how you translated donkeys and flocks in Genesis 12:16. Alternate translation: [many cattle, donkeys, and flocks of sheep and goats]
וְעֶ֣בֶד וְשִׁפְחָ֑ה
and_[male],servant[s] (Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_was to=me oxen and,donkey[s] flock_of_sheep/goats and_[male],servant[s] and,female_servant[s] and,I,have_sent to=announce to,lord_of,my to,find graciousness/kindness/favour/beauty in,eyes_of,your )
See how you translated a similar phrase in Genesis 12:16. Alternate translation: [as well as many men and women slaves]
Note 2 topic: writing-politeness
וָֽאֶשְׁלְחָה֙ לְהַגִּ֣יד לַֽאדֹנִ֔י
(Some words not found in UHB: and=he/it_was to=me oxen and,donkey[s] flock_of_sheep/goats and_[male],servant[s] and,female_servant[s] and,I,have_sent to=announce to,lord_of,my to,find graciousness/kindness/favour/beauty in,eyes_of,your )
If you use indirect quotes in this section, make sure each part fits with the other parts, especially in your choice of pronouns. It is helpful if you read your translation aloud to check for accuracy and naturalness. Alternate translation: [Sir, I sent these messengers to you]
OET-LV (GEN 32:6) [fn] And_he/it_was to_me ox[en] and_donkey[s] flock[s] and_male_servants and_female_servant[s] and_I_have_sent to_announce to_master_of_my to_find favour in_eyes_of_your.
32:6 Note: KJB: Gen.32.5
OET (OET-RV) Now I have cattle and donkeys, flocks, and male and female slaves. And I’ve sent these messengers to speak with my master, so that I’ll find favour in your eyes.” ’ ”
Note: The OET-RV is still only a first draft, and so far only a few words have been (mostly automatically) matched to the Hebrew or Greek words that they’re translated from.
Acknowledgements: The Hebrew text, lemmas, and morphology are all thanks to the OSHB and some of the glosses are from Macula Hebrew.