OET interlinear PSA 27:6

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / idiom

וְ⁠עַתָּ֨ה יָר֪וּם רֹאשִׁ֡⁠י עַ֤ל

(Some words not found in UHB: and=now lifted_up my=head on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in enemies_of,my around_of,me and,I_will_sacrifice in,tent_of,his sacrifices_of shouts_of_joy sing and,I_will_sing_praises to/for=YHWH )

David is using my head will be lifted up as a common expression of his culture to mean “I will be exalted” or “I will triumph.” If this phrase does not have that meaning for your readers, you could use a comparable expression from your language that does have that meaning, or you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: [And now I will be exalted above]

Note 2 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

בְ֭⁠אָהֳל⁠וֹ

in,tent_of,his

See how you translated the phrase “his tent” in the previous verse where it is used with the same meaning. Alternate translation: [in his tabernacle]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

וְ⁠אֶזְבְּחָ֣ה בְ֭⁠אָהֳל⁠וֹ זִבְחֵ֣י תְרוּעָ֑ה

(Some words not found in UHB: and=now lifted_up my=head on/upon/above/on_account_of//he/it_went_in enemies_of,my around_of,me and,I_will_sacrifice in,tent_of,his sacrifices_of shouts_of_joy sing and,I_will_sing_praises to/for=YHWH )

By sacrifices of a shout of joy, David means sacrifices that he offers while shouting joyfully to God. You could indicate this explicitly in your translation if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: [and I will joyfully shout as I sacrifice in his tent]