OET interlinear PSA 22:17

uW Translation Notes:

Note 1 topic: figures-of-speech / hyperbole

אֲסַפֵּ֥ר כָּל־עַצְמוֹתָ֑⁠י

(Some words not found in UHB: that/for/because/then/when they,have_surrounded_me dogs gang_of evildoers they,have_encircled_me like,lion hands_of,my and,feet_of,my )

David says I can count all my bones as an overstatement for emphasis. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use a different way to express the emphasis. Alternate translation: [I am so thin and emaciated that I can count many of my bones] or [I am so thin and emaciated that people can see many of my bones]

Note 2 topic: writing-pronouns

הֵ֥מָּה יַ֝בִּ֗יטוּ יִרְאוּ־בִֽ⁠י

(Some words not found in UHB: that/for/because/then/when they,have_surrounded_me dogs gang_of evildoers they,have_encircled_me like,lion hands_of,my and,feet_of,my )

The pronoun They refers to David’s enemies who have surrounded him (mentioned in the previous verses as “dogs” and “a company of ones doing evil”). It may be helpful to clarify this for your readers. Alternate translation: [My enemies look and they stare at me]

Note 3 topic: figures-of-speech / explicit

הֵ֥מָּה יַ֝בִּ֗יטוּ יִרְאוּ־בִֽ⁠י

(Some words not found in UHB: that/for/because/then/when they,have_surrounded_me dogs gang_of evildoers they,have_encircled_me like,lion hands_of,my and,feet_of,my )

The implication is that David’s enemies stare at him and gloat. You could include this information, as in the UST, if that would be helpful to your readers.